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Hah! A typo cryptid!
"to dig into tree bark." "Which help it dig into tree bark" is better phrasing.
"While it does not change their colors" There's pronoun confusion there.
" soft shelled" is better as "soft-shelled". That makes it grammatically clearer they aren't shelled (with the shell-removed) eggs which are also soft, but eggs with soft shells.
"off of sources" "Off of" is redundant.

I like its sprawling, scaly, dinosaur-like look. I somehow get the impression this fauna will get really popular.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Jun 29 2021, 12:31 AM)

Hah! A typo cryptid! "to dig into tree bark." "Which help it dig into tree bark" is better phrasing. "While it does not change their colors" There's pronoun confusion there. " soft shelled" is better as "soft-shelled". That makes it grammatically clearer they aren't shelled (with the shell-removed) eggs which are also soft, but eggs with soft shells. "off of sources" "Off of" is redundant. I like its sprawling, scaly, dinosaur-like look. I somehow get the impression this fauna will get really popular.

Yeah, I also chose the Fat Lizatokage for the ancestor because that guy needs more love.

Fixed the typos and grammatical issues, think its good?

Yeah Cheatsy and Nergali already love it, so I would not be surprised.