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Interesting...group tactics are less effective if a population dips due to competition. That might be a weak spot for other group hunters. Sauceback or "raptor sauceback" eggs are its favorite, right?

I see it eats Dungshell Fraboos. Does it not mind the taste of dung?

I like its coloration. This art style is pleasant.

I was originally gonna add more fraboos but all the other fraboos in its range are unreasonably large

It is odd that it should not mind the taste of dung when it eats just eggs, Teacup Saucebacks, Eggslurping Sorites, and various berries and fruit. Pigs, snowy sheathbills, and to a lesser extent marabou storks are examples of feces-eating vertebrates, but they're extreme omnivores. These don't even scavenge. I think it would be good to note how it doesn't mind the taste of Dungshell Fraboo dung, and better yet, to provide some kind of reason for it.

I just made the fraboo a rarer part of its diet.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name: Velocitoon
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: (Sorex crash)
Creator?: Disgustedorite

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:

• External?: Orange and blue fur, more fur on the muzzle,
• Internal?: N/A
• Behavioral/Mental?: More social lifestyle and hiding in burrows during the winter

Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: (If yes, list why) No...

Habitat: Darwin Chapparal, Darwin Plains, Vivus Rocky, Vivus High Grassland, Dixon-Darwin Rocky, Dixon-Darwin High Grassland, Bone Temperate Riparian, Irinya Temperate Riparian
Type?: 2/2
Flavor?: 3/3
Connected?: Y
Wildcard?: NO!

Size: 62 cm
Same as Ancestor?: Just 2 centimeters bigger
Within range?: Yes
Exception?: NO NONONONONO!!!

Support: Endoskeleton (Bone)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Diet: Omnivore
Same as Ancestor?: Mostly
Transition Rule?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Added fruit and the Dung Fraboo in its diet

Respiration: Active (Lungs)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Thermoregulation: Endotherm (Fur)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Reproduction: Sexual (Male and Female, Live Birth, Pouch and Milk)
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/A
Other?: N/A

Description:
Length?: Great!
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: Velocitoon vs Shikaaree needs to be drawn as a Crash Bandicoot style boss

Status: Approved