It's great to see you again, Hydromancerx. It's an appropriately alien-looking organism.

"200 cm long". "2 meters/2 m long" is customary at this size.
"ti it" To it.
"th least" The least.
"waters propelling" needs a comma after "water".
"once trapped" is grammatically unclear.
"ease. Even" has a minor spacing error.

I approve of this organism greatly. I'm glad you're back, Hydromancerx! It's very interesting. I like how the name is so simple, like the name of a real species of organism, its a nice change from all the bad puns and complex etymologies that everyone else does lately //files.jcink.net/html/emoticons/tongue.gif. It's also good that we finally have something, ANYTHING, that lives in the oceans at all. I can't believe they've been so ignored this gen, come to think of it. Also, bonus that it's a deep sea organism. The deep sea is just criminally impoverished of ecological diversity.

I'm happy to see another of these from an oddball lineage

Ayy, love the updates

The description still has typos I've pointed out earlier.

Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?: Size, pigmentation, gained baleen
External?: Y
Internal?: Y
Behavioral/Mental?: N
Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: N

Habitat:
Type?:
Flavor?:
Connected?:
Wildcard?:

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: Abyssal

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: Na
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na

Description:
Length?: Acceptable, covers it
Capitalized correctly?: Unknown
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: Spelling errors need work

Opinion: Pending needs working errors fixed, someone else do biomes

This post has been edited by colddigger: Dec 18 2021, 02:30 PM