It's great to see you again, Hydromancerx. It's an appropriately alien-looking organism.
"200 cm long". "2 meters/2 m long" is customary at this size.
"ti it" To it.
"th least" The least.
"waters propelling" needs a comma after "water".
"once trapped" is grammatically unclear.
"ease. Even" has a minor spacing error.
"200 cm long". "2 meters/2 m long" is customary at this size.
"ti it" To it.
"th least" The least.
"waters propelling" needs a comma after "water".
"once trapped" is grammatically unclear.
"ease. Even" has a minor spacing error.
I approve of this organism greatly. I'm glad you're back, Hydromancerx! It's very interesting. I like how the name is so simple, like the name of a real species of organism, its a nice change from all the bad puns and complex etymologies that everyone else does lately 
. It's also good that we finally have something, ANYTHING, that lives in the oceans at all. I can't believe they've been so ignored this gen, come to think of it. Also, bonus that it's a deep sea organism. The deep sea is just criminally impoverished of ecological diversity.
. It's also good that we finally have something, ANYTHING, that lives in the oceans at all. I can't believe they've been so ignored this gen, come to think of it. Also, bonus that it's a deep sea organism. The deep sea is just criminally impoverished of ecological diversity.
I'm happy to see another of these from an oddball lineage
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y
Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y
Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?: Size, pigmentation, gained baleen
External?: Y
Internal?: Y
Behavioral/Mental?: N
Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: N
Habitat:
Type?:
Flavor?:
Connected?:
Wildcard?:
Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: Abyssal
Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: Na
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Description:
Length?: Acceptable, covers it
Capitalized correctly?: Unknown
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: Spelling errors need work
Opinion: Pending needs working errors fixed, someone else do biomes
This post has been edited by colddigger: Dec 18 2021, 02:30 PM
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y
Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y
Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?: Size, pigmentation, gained baleen
External?: Y
Internal?: Y
Behavioral/Mental?: N
Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: N
Habitat:
Type?:
Flavor?:
Connected?:
Wildcard?:
Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: Abyssal
Support:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: y
Transition Rule?: Na
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Na
Other?: Na
Description:
Length?: Acceptable, covers it
Capitalized correctly?: Unknown
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: Spelling errors need work
Opinion: Pending needs working errors fixed, someone else do biomes
This post has been edited by colddigger: Dec 18 2021, 02:30 PM
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