" having distributing" Having distributed.
"sharps squeaks": Sharp squeaks.

"distressed squeaky gremlin," I see this is the part that makes it a work in progress.
...these spread because they are fun squeaky toys. That is unusual.
Those are a lot of habitats, but it's impossible to evaluate because the habitat rules are apparently outdated.


The main thing outdated with the habitat rules is that for whatever reason a few biomes are placed in the wrong type and lumped into a single flavor when they shouldn't be, mainly oceanic biomes, because prior to the ice age they were not split into temperature types and were treated completely differently altogether before the ice comet and the rules simply have not caught up for some reason (a fact I am certain of because if they were taken at face value, a species in both tropical and glacial oceans would be allowed). This looks like it fits into the rules anyway, at least in terms of types and flavors.

That said, I don't think this could go global like that. Shrogs do indeed transport a lot of fauna, but unless these are being kept as long-term pets they aren't gonna get across the ocean any further than about flyway distance, and if they are kept long-term, they would need two additional flavors (coast/shallows and open ocean).

Edit: This thread explains better. http://sagan4.jcink.net/index.php?showtopic=928

Ok, I'll make the full changes once I get back from work. I'll probably have them head inwards for warmer climates from either Colddigger or Drake polar beach... more likely the former as it has flunejaws, so that would let me keep the current part of the description mentioning them

Branching Qupe Tree in the habitat list? It's not particularly adapted for arboreal life.

Besides that, this little guy is pretty funny. Too bad it not only is incapable of appreciating its own squeaky toy cries, but even if it can hear it'd still find the effort extremely taxing.

For as smitten as we are with small, squeaky critters, let's be thankful there's no mention of smuggling small vertebrate-like saganites for the extraterrestrial pet trade (and that's to say the nauceans have not yet dealt with such operations). A good pet this guy ain't!

This post has been edited by sad-dingus (chillypaz): Nov 16 2021, 05:31 AM

"Branching Qupe Tree" For that to be in the habitat list, it must be an extremely big Branching Qupe Tree. That, or it's an error.

"immanent" is a typo of "imminent", since I doubt their extinction was of a divine nature.

"have difficulty warm." You probably meant 'warming up".

Thanks for catching those mistakes. I've fixed them.