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"in doing so" There's a missing period.
"hosts immune system" Hosts' immune system.
Oh good: genus-group-targeting diseases/parasites.
I can give more information when it's done.

QUOTE (Coolsteph @ Nov 15 2021, 10:42 AM)

"in doing so" There's a missing period. "hosts immune system" Hosts' immune system. Oh good: genus-group-targeting diseases/parasites. I can give more information when it's done.

Ok, I've made the changes, and the description is now essentially all set.

Holy Chimlopzock this is gruesome; sure wouldn't wanna be reincarnated as a gilltail now that these are a thing.

Now all we need are more proper multi-host parasites cause this biosphere sure could use a lot of em!

Nice and vicious

"being near": Begin near.
" in order better": "In order to better".
"now a much more mobile" A much more mobile form, you mean?
"awhile that this" All while this.

Thanks, I made the edits.