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Could you add the image of both the Walker/Shell symbiotes together as a supplementary piece? I saw it in the discord earlier and it would help a bit.

Supplemental added

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?:
External?: Y
Internal?: Y
Behavioral/Mental?: Y
Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: Y, significant body changes

Habitat:
Type?: 1
Flavor?: 3??
Connected?: Y??
Wildcard?: ...

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: Na

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Clarifying

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Transition Rule?: Na
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Changed term for feeding on symbiont

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Clarifying

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Clarifying

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Change from spore covered to jerky covered is fairly minor

Description:
Length?: Okay
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: Much of reproductive description revolves more around symbiont rather than description of strictly creab Walker reproduction method, because it is simple this is okay.

Opinion: Pending(why);



"signals produced by the creab shell’s eyes"

Unnecessary apostrophe

QUOTE (colddigger @ Dec 20 2021, 09:47 PM)

"signals produced by the creab shell’s eyes" Unnecessary apostrophe

Are you sure? They are the eyes possessed by the creab shell. I also expanded the size somewhat so the symbiont would fit with its now larger size

This post has been edited by kopout: Dec 20 2021, 09:33 PM

I'm not a grammatical whiz so I'm not sure.