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The only thing that's WIP here is the supplemental image, everything else is presentable.

I thought support was exoskeleton, unknown material, and respiration was gills and uhhh haemocyanin

I'm excited to see both an echofin, and a deep sea addition.

I've often wondered how well they may swim with that funnel, yours narrowing is good, also it probably is just slower and slightly wobbly. Not too detrimental.

QUOTE (colddigger @ Dec 8 2021, 08:03 AM)

I thought support was exoskeleton, unknown material, and respiration was gills and uhhh haemocyanin

Added

"their head"
"Male and Female Twilight Echofins": This is erroneous capitalization.
"Hormone Carrier" is also erroneously capitalized.

Merging the hormone carrier anglerfish-style is very efficient. It could be a significant evolutionary development.

Supplement image is completed so this is no longer a WIP.

Approval Checklist:
Art:
Art Present?: Y
Art clear?: Y
Gen number?: Y
All limbs shown?: Y
Reasonably Comparable to Ancestor?: Y
Realistic additions?: Y

Name:
Binomial Taxonomic Name?: Y
Creator?: Y

Ancestor:
Listed?: Y
What changes?: Narrower cone, feeding habits, method of mate acquisition
External?: Y
Internal?: N
Behavioral/Mental?: Y
Are Changes Realistic?: Y
New Genus Needed?: Yes, notable reproduction behavior change

Habitat:
Type?: 1
Flavor?: 1?
Connected?: Y?
Wildcard?: N?

Size:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Within range?: Y
Exception?: N/a

Support:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Clarifying

Diet:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Transition Rule?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y

Respiration:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Clarifying

Thermoregulation:
Same as Ancestor?: N
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: Y
Other?: Clarifying

Reproduction:
Same as Ancestor?: Y
Does It Fit Habitat?: Y
Reasonable changes (if any)?: N/a
Other?:n/a

Description:
Length?: Good
Capitalized correctly?: Y
Replace/Split from ancestor?: Split
Other?: N/a

Opinion: Approved